Will You Be My Valentine?

Will You Be My Valentine?

A Poem by Kara Emily Krantz
"

Not going to win me any awards, but sometimes we need to be silly.

"

Will you share this special day

with me?

 

This silly, over dramatic day;

This disguised yet disarmingly

tragic day?

 

Okay,

let's get introductions out of the way.

 

I'm a Virgo with a tender tendency

to cry.

and a lilt to my smile

that will invite you in,

and a whimsical innocence...

 

Nah, let's try this again.

 

I'm a student of psychology,

but there's a million things

so very wrong with me.

In the evening i will place so delicately

your fingers to my lips.

 

We will be safe, together.

 

Am I making sense?

Whatever.

 

Instead let's talk about

our secret hopes and dreams.

Mine are quite dusty,

and ripping at the seams.

 

You could inspire me to live again;

perhaps find my magic muse again?

 

How silly and so selfish of me;

To place upon you the burden

of such responsibility!

 

You know what?

Forget it.

 

We're better off alone.

 

Maybe next year, we'll both have better luck.

 

But seriously?

I mean seriously,

 

I don't give a f**k.

 

 

© 2008 Kara Emily Krantz


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I had a moment like this earlier on!
I love the introduction to you..........and all the uplifting things that could be if he so choose....
And the end of course, the uncaring well, f**k you, and its not a responsibilty to be loved and want love............great catchy piece.........I expect Valentines day provokes alot of thoughts.........

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Well put. Thanks for the insight and humor! I needed a good laugh!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Everybody should have a 'song of myself'. Or two or three, one for every mood. I like the guise of this one as one side of a conversation.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I had a moment like this earlier on!
I love the introduction to you..........and all the uplifting things that could be if he so choose....
And the end of course, the uncaring well, f**k you, and its not a responsibilty to be loved and want love............great catchy piece.........I expect Valentines day provokes alot of thoughts.........

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Kara Emily Krantz
Kara Emily Krantz

http://karaemily.wordpress.com, MA



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I am resolved to never be content with the lives of "quiet desperation" which so many of us lead, to continuously challenge myself, and forever walk in Beauty. I like pandas. I like writing poe.. more..

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