a little messy

jump to conclusions
[with me]
we could go about this
quite deliriously.

let's ignore the pleas
of our analytical minds
and operate under the notion
that love is simply blind.

i'm tired of being scared
of another broken heart
the suture will never seal
if the healing never starts.

jump into [puddles]
and conclusions with me
let's wash our hands of this
and get a little messy.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow this is fascinating... you want to break those barriers and hash it out with someone who thinks they know you but doesn't have a clue... I love the whole get down and dirty take no prisoner approach, that's the best way. A stand up and take charge rant from you in your one of a kind way... BRAVO!!

[Gandré]

I understood that now you wanted just let it flow and be more concrete than dissecting..."let's ignore the pleas of our analytical minds the relationship or a possible one into pieces"....and bury the magic ....cute - "jump into puddles" I liked it...who can say in with more charm?

[Alicia]

cute, I love this.

[Shannon Drake]

yep. this well be my FIRST favorite. deffinitly.

wow.


LOVE it.


you AMAZE me.

[Avoiry]

i love this. I got hurt bad. And that is close to my mentality forget the past and embrace what could be forgetting all fear.

[Emilie Swan]

Thanks for commenting on my poem, thought to check yours:]

I've never been in love, but this made me kinda long for that. You painted it to be so innocent, something not to analyze, just to blindely go with it. Your use of words and making it somewhat surrealistic is simply adorable. I might said I loved this one!

[Crystal]

Yeah, I already commented, but I didn't know how to make it a fave.

[Crystal]

Let's wash our hands of this and get a little messy... that is simply delightful! I love to read something I can relate to and this was just too cute!

[Shane Rendon]

I LOVED this. Inoccent, determined, scared. So many emotions at once. young love tends to have that affect though. I really dig it.
-Shane

[Nihad Dweidary]

Love is daring, adventurous, and risky oftentimes. That is the beauty it brings with it sometimes. Is there a better thing than just stepping the "puddle" and laughing at yourself afterwards? Mmmm.

I love your words.

Nihad