join me

trail across me now
tickling my hardness soft
-join me in this life-

Reviews

[John Coolidge]

I liked this. Great haiku.

[Maria Retz]

Beautiful

tickling my hardness soft

So relieving

[Rc R. Vagilidad]

wow. i get a lot of insights to this. the picture made me remember of the polar bears in alaska (as shown in NatGeo) that they really have to stick together to survive, especially the cubs, always traveling together with their moms... i love this. i can say that it has its imaginary perpspective of inspiration, well, i still need to know that from you. kudos! I Love this...

[Anhedonia 1349]

I feel kinda guilty for the last haiku I reviewed - I gave it a 3 because I felt as though the images presented therein weren't powerful enough for the form.

This is totally different. To me, you manage to sum up all the reasons we live and fall in love, all in this one, short piece.

Join me in this life - it sounds as if you're enjoying your life and you want to share that enjoyment with people around you. To me, that's precisely the emotion that's worthy of haiku.

Great Job. 5.

[Eshe' Allen]

nicely done.

"tickling my hardness soft"

my mind ran down a stream of possibilities. truly enjoyable.