evaporation

steam rises from us.

heat meets my ebb / and your flow.

still... i let you go.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow you even know how to pack a punch with such few words... sometimes two people no matter how passionate about each other must go their separate ways. Your words amaze me again.

[Mr. Lopez]

How confusing is love? The reward so grand and the quest to long. How people write so much in so few words still baffles me. Very nice work Kara.

[Flow]

Letting go of passion?? such strength one must have.. :)

[Ed Rector]

that's very melohncolly... sorry...

[Otto L.n. Pipgras]

why !? why let go? it was just gettin all steamy n stuff...ohhh wait.... you clever little...first I think it's sad...then wait...no....yes, it's sad... =o( very interesting choice of words for the last line...it turns this into a three pronged alternate ending for me... nice one, Kara

O.o
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[Doug Case]

Oh...don't let go! I hate sad endings! =)

The only two things I would do differently is change the elipsis to a comma and remove the period at the end. I was once taught that haiku deserves minimal punctuation, and I guess it stuck.

But, otherwise, amazing.

[Gandré]

this is perfect ! And sooo deep!

[Sean Allen]

Briliant,
The 'Nature' of a man and a woman...
for "all seasons".

Perfect by the rules Haiku

I couldn't rate this 'My favorite' because this is the first poem of yours I have read.

You know Kara, when I was your age, you were still 40 years in the future. Isn't that just how life is...there's never a 'Time Machine' around when you need one.

[Ted]

Why?