i think of us

I think of all the times I would shower

      knowing your hands would be the next to touch my skin

(I would want every part of me smooth)

I wanted every part of me to soak you in.

 

I think of all the times I would lay there

       with nothing but a towel wrapped around

(you would unwrap me slowly and show me)

how good it felt to be found.

 

I think of all the times you would touch me

      I would tremble... My god, I would fall apart.

(We tasted the sweetness of each other's bodies)

We tasted the sweetness of the heart.

 

I think of all the times you would kiss me

       and a fire would burn deep inside

(we were desperate to join, to create, to converge)

Often so desperate I would cry.

 

I think of all the times you would pin me

      against the wall, against the bed, against the floor

(our passion was so powerful it moved me)

I always begged for more.

 

I think of all the times you touch her

      the way you have been touching, tasting, teasing me

(my breath hitches, my soul clenches)

My heart- it cries to be set free.

 

I think of all the times I will be touched

      by other men, other moments, other moonlight

(the thoughts are still ragged, still ruthless)

but they are thoughts I would be foolish to fight.

 

I think of all the times that you loved me.

        and goodness, my darling, I loved you, too.

(My heart will heal, we will all move on)

But I will still think of you.

Reviews

[Kelly D. Burris]

Wow, such intensity and revealing emotion in this piece, just amazing!! We all go thru times feeling these things I'm sure, just not able or willing to express them.......and it wouldn't be as good as the way you have expressed it here.
Wonderful write, a style all your own.
Kelly

[An owl on the moon]

So beautiful and raining with silver passion. You evoke the memory with such azure melancholy, the thoughts and feelings of the once lover. Magnificent in every way!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

-jaw dropped open- Holy ***, oh what emotional storms rage in this masterpiece you write, you know how much i love your work but this just so incredibly touching... all i can say is WOW!! There are loves in our life we will move on from but they will still have a special place in our hearts, never have I heard it expressed like this... I know I am babbling but... sorry let me just say Amazing!! Ok I'm going to shut up now... one m ore thing the whole thing was well you know but that first stanza was HOT!!

[Mariah]

"I think of all the times you would pin me

against the wall, against the bed, against the floor

(our passion was so powerful it moved me)

I always begged for more."



it's amazing how something so sexual, can actually seem so sweet.

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"I think of all the times you touch her

the way you have been touching, tasting, teasing me

(my breath hitches, my soul clenches)

My heart- it cries to be set free."

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"this is heart-breaking, knowing he could look at another, the way he does you.
i know how it feels. :(

I think of all the times I will be touched

by other men, other moments, other moonlight

(the thoughts are still ragged, still ruthless)

but they are thoughts I would be foolish to fight."

i think of this too, and these times don't seem too appealing to me .....

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I think of all the times that you loved me.

and goodness, my darling, I loved you, too.

(My heart will heal, we will all move on)

But I will still think of you.

heart-breaking.
mind-blowing.
hit the nail on the head.


your writing brings me to tears. !
in the damn school library. !

[Antony]

I think of all the times you would pin me
Against the wall, against the bed, against the floor
( our passion was so powerful it moved me)
I always begged for more.
Wow Kara, that is very erotic. My kind of girl.
Tony

[Trisha Clark]

I think of all the times I would shower
Knowing your hands would be the next to touch my skin
(I would want every inch of me smooth)
I wanted every part of me to soak you in.

You always say what I mean to.

[Alicia]

I think of all the times that you loved me
And goodness, my darling, I loved you, too
(my heart will heal, we will all move on)
But I will still think of you.

You couldn't have said it better!

[Torre]

Throughout life I think this is something that everyone has to go through at some point during life. For those who have been through a bad break up and have these thoughts you definetely captured the feeling. For those who havent been through such pain and frustration you make them feel yours. Great job.

[Rc R. Vagilidad]

"But I will still think of you."- sad, very powerful, you said it with distinctness of your heart and sincerity, of course!

Well, if you still have to feel all those miseries, better yet forget all 'bout them, move on!

GREAT PIECE, rendering dearly insights!
BTW, he is worth a few knuckles, forget bout him! lol

[Dylan K. Gedilltenbourg..]

Wow, that was amazing. I've never experienced that, but this made me relate so much.

Great work