TAPAN

har mushkil hame kuch na seekh deker jati hai.sona jb tak aag me nhi tapta usme nikhaar nhi aata.

takleefo se baar baar kahe ko rona,

aag me tapkar hi to nikharta hai sona,

yadi chhoti chhoti baato pr karne lage ranj,

ya phir zindagi pe kasne lage tanj,

to jeevan jeene ka kya arth hai,

chunautio ke binajeena vyarth hai,

fursat hona hi dukhi hone ka ehsaas hai,

vyast ho jao us khwaab ki khatir jo khaas hai,

jo samajhdaar hai dil pe koi bojha n leta,

kisi ki khatir kuchh kare to dil pe koi bojha nhi rehta.

Author's Note

likha to hai per kahin to kuch adhura sa lag raha hai....

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

bhut accha likha hai aapne... aur bhut sahi cheez bhi....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

takleefo se baar baar kahe ko rona,
aag me tapkar hi to nikharta hai sona.

yadi chhoti chhoti baato pr karne lage ranj,
ya phir zindagi hi pe kasne lage tanj,

to jeewan jeena ka kya aarth hai,
chunautiyo ke bina jeena wyarth hai.

fursat hona hi dukhi hone ka ehsaas hai,
vyast hojao us khwaab ki kgaatir jo khaas hai.

jo samajhdaar hai dil pe koi bojha n leta hai.
kisi ki khatir kuchh kare to dil pe koi bojha nhi
rehta hai.

thodi jyaada himmat kar li.....galti maaf.....

[sapna sagar]

thank u pushkar ji....mujhe meri galtiya ab samajh me aayi.....kaise kahu ....bahot dil se shukriya.....is adhuri si lagti kavita ko arth dene ke liye.....aap ne mujhe sikhaya ki shbdo ko thoda wqt or ehsas do to kami puri ho jati hai......maine pehle bhi kaha hai fir kehti hu ..aapse bahot kuch seekhna hai.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

arre hum sab ek dusre se kuch na kuch seekhte hi hai......khushi hai ki aapko meri naadani pasand aayi......shukriya ki koi baat nhi.... :) :)

[sapna sagar]

arey aapne jo kiya koi karta kaha hai.....maine edit bhi kar di hai ....thank u so much.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

aree koi baat nhi......bus aise hi likhte rahiye....

[Rajat malik]

khubsurat hai lekin frankly speaking kuch ajeeb sa lag RHA h.....

[sapna sagar]

haan...mujhe bhi yahi laga....kahin to kuchh kami hai.....aap batayiye?

[Rajat malik]

Aakhri do lines me thoda change kr do....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

nhi adhura nhi behtareen hai.....
haan bus 6th pankti ke aakhir me "hai" ki shayad jarurat h...
sona tap kar hi sache me kundan banta hai....
bahot badhaayi!!!!
:)

[sapna sagar]

aap thik kehte hain pr mai us line me "hai" ko kaise shamil karu?
apne ise pdha mere liye bahot badi baat hai.....thank u so much...