Dard

aaj vriddha aashram me ek aisi mahila se mili jiski kahani suni to laga ki aaj inme jo taakat jo honsla dikh raha hai bs wo hi sachcha saathi hota hai...na rishtey na unka lihaz....pr wo khush thin...

Dard jab dard se haar jaata hai,

jeene ka salika tabhi to aata hai,

lakh log boliyaan sunate rahe,

vyangya or taane gungunate rahe,

dil pe asar chala sa jaata hai,

dara jab dard se haar jaata hai........

aankh jo num hamesha rehti thi,

shakl bina kahe kuchh na kuchh to kehti thi,

dil pe ab kuchh asar nhi karti,

baate ab dil me ghar nahi karti,

aansu bhi rukhsat hua sa jaata hai,

aankho me ab noor nazar aata hai,

aag dekar ke kya ehsaan karega koi,

doodh ke karz se farishta bhi sihar jaata hai

dard jab dard se haar jaata hai ,

jeene ka salika tabhi to aata hai.......... 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Bhut acche Sapna ji... kabhi kabhi dusro ka dard dekh kar apna dard kum lagta hai.... bhut khoob likha aapne....

[sapna sagar]

thank u so much....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Waah waah.......
bahot khoobsurat......
"dard jab dard se haar jaata hai........" bahot khoob!!!!
umnda kavita.....
bahot badhaayi....!!!
:)

[sapna sagar]

shukriya pushkar ji...aapke review ka to intzaar tha mujhe....meri galtian to batayiye....

[Maumil Mehraj]

"dard jab dard se haar jaata hai" ....keval is line me aapne zindagi ki itni sachaaiyaan keh di hain ki aage kuch kehna zaroorat hi nahi hota....again a mesmerizing poem from you
Maumil

[sapna sagar]

thank u maumil....mujhe samajh nhi aarha tha ki kya likhu...jisme mai us kamjori se mili taakat bayaan kr sakun bs koshish ki.....

[Rajat malik]

Aapne sach me bahut hi acchi kavita likhi h.....'dard jab dard se haar jaata hai ,jeene ka salika tabhi to aata hai..........' ye wali line manmohak thi

[sapna sagar]

thank u rajat.....mujhe to laga aapko kavitayein achhi n lagi to pdhna hi chhod diya....

[Rajat malik]

nahi aap aise soch bhi kaise sakti hai....
aapki kavitayen main na padhu ,aisa nahi ho sakta

[sapna sagar]

aapko mera likha thik lagta hai iske liye bahot bahot shukriya.....

[Rajat malik]

Hmmm.....my pleasure :)

[Rajat malik]

Aur batao kuch, bahut dino se baat nahi hui aapse :|

[sapna sagar]

aapne ki hi nhi.

[Rajat malik]

Nah!!! aapne kabhi koshish hi nahi ki...to mujhe laga ki shayad aap bhul gayi hai

[Gurleen Saluja]

Bohot.hi achi kavita ma'am.. Thank you share karne ke liye. :)

[sapna sagar]

aap jaise guni logo se taarif ka milna mayne rakhta hai.....thank u so much.....aapse to seekhna bhi hai....

[Gurleen Saluja]

Arey ma'am kya baat kr rhe ho..

[sapna sagar]

arey aapke award batate hai mai to stand bhi nhi karti.....mujhe apne se chhoto se sikhne me shrm nhi aati.

[Gurleen Saluja]

Arey kya ma'am.. Thank you fir bhi :)