achha lagta hai

har ek ko kuchh na kuchh achha lagta hai.....mujhe bhi....

mai likhti hu kyoki...mujhko likhna achha lagta hai,

mai nhi roti kyoki....mujhko hasna achha lagta hai,

chupp nhi rehti bak bak karti....bahot bolti hu mai,

kyonki bolna, batein karna mujhe achha lagta hai,

hare bhare kheto me ghumna,phoolon ko sehlana,

baarish ki boondo ko pakdna,or paani se khelna,

nadi kinare pairr dalker,paani ki lehron pr,

pairr chala kar lehre ginna,mujhe achha lagta hai,

chhat pe letna taare ginna,chand se baate karna,

or muthhi me chand pakdna mujhe achha lagta hai,

shaam ko chhat pr aasman me jitne baadal dikhte,

unme bhaalu or magar banana mujhe achha lagta hai,

mai likhti hu kyonki mujhko likhna achha lagta hai......

Author's Note

galti k liye maafi....

Reviews

[Rajat malik]

Aapne hame sach se parichit kara diya :)
WO cheeje Jo sabhi ko kisi na kisi samay lubhaati aayi hai unko aapne apni kavita me jataya hai :) bahoot khoob

[Pushkar Prabhat]

waah!!! bahot khubsurat...........
likhna sach me bahot acha lagta hai........aur aap achcha likhti bhi hain........
kabhi kabhi shayad likhna majburi bhi ban jaati hai...........har doosri aadat ki tarah!!!
bahot badaayi!!!
:)

[sapna sagar]

shukriya !!!sach me pushkar ji kabhi kabhi mann manta nhi....jo dil me aata hai likh jata hai.....achha ya bura ....soch hi n pata...

[Gurleen Saluja]

Ma'am beautifully presented.. And rightly said.. Har kisi.ko kuch na kuch acha lagta hai.. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

Ek bohat informal si poem thi...aapke emotions bohat khoobi se ubhar kar saamne aarahe the...
Beautiful work!
Maumil

[sapna sagar]

haan sach me bass uhin is chilchilati dhoop me kuch pal yaad kar rahi thi ,or panne pe utaar diya... pdhne ke liye shukriya maumil.....aap to janti hi hai mai to aapki fan hu.thank u...

[CA Anurag Sharma]

shayad yeh sub mujhe bhi acha lagta hai par zindagi ki kashmkash main inn cheezo ko hum bhulte jaa rahe hai... yaad karwaane k liye shukriya.....waise bhut accha likha aapne....

[sapna sagar]

thank u anurag....sach me zindagi ke ye chhote chhote pal hm kashmakash me bhul jaate hai.....pr jb bhi mouka milta hai jitna bhi milta hai mai pakad leti hu...aapko ye halki fulki kavita kuch yaad dila gayi to mera likhna safal hai......thank u so so much.