MUJHE JAANE DO

kal maine hospital me ek marrti hui maa ki oar asha ki ummeed liye un bde bde bachcho ki aankhe padhne ki koshish ki....beton ka dard to dikh rha tha pr jhurrion bhare chehre pr maa k jo bhaav the!!!

tujhse duur nahi ja sakti ,

tere paas nahi aa sakti,

dumm hai ghuta ghuta sa,

saanse bhi ab to kamm hai,

rokk na mere bachho mujhko,

mere paas waqt kamm hai,

koi kami nhin hai mujhko,

tum sabb mere paas khade ho,

khush raho sabb sukhi raho,

yahi mere arman bade hai,

bahut koshishe sabb ne ki hain,

parr ab waqt nhi mere paas,

kuch saanse mai ghar me le lu,

mann me ek yahi hai aas,

tera haath mujhse chhoot raha,

mera saath tujhse chhoot raha,

ab tujhko chhod rahi hun mai,

sabb tujh pr chhod rahi hu mai,

chinta matt karna mere bachche,

tere saath mai sda rahungi,

chhaya me apni rakkhungi,

bass ab MUJHE JAANE DE.

Author's Note

KOI GALTI HO TO MAAF KARIYEGA.

Reviews

[Gurleen Saluja]

Wow ma'am a heartwarming write. Thank you for sharing. :)

[sapna sagar]

thank u gurleen.....aapko pasand aayi.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

sanwedna se bhari kavitaa......
bhawuuk kar diya.....
bahot khoobsurat.....
bahot badaayi.........
:)

[sapna sagar]

thank u pushkar ji.......

[CA Anurag Sharma]

bhut acchi thi....its too emotional... i can feel the pain in it... good work

[sapna sagar]

shukriya...........

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Itna badhia likhkar aap kahan jana chahti hain aap ne to hum jaise dosto ke dil mein jagah kar li hain use jeet liya hain bus sada hamare saath rahon aur isse bhi badhia likhte rahon .

[sapna sagar]

thank u sir aapko pasand ayi meri kavita....

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Bhavuk hona, sensitive hona hum writers aur poets ki sabse badi milkat hain . hum log ek chhoti si chiti ko nahin mar sakte to phir insaan ki dard aur pida ko kaise bardast kar le .

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Bhavuk hona, sensitive hona hum writers aur poets ki sabse badi milkat hain . hum log ek chhoti si chiti ko nahin mar sakte to phir insaan ki dard aur pida ko kaise bardast kar le .

[nazia]

Yeh ek aisi ghatna ya sahi mayne me durghatna hai jise samajh paana bhi bht mushkil hai. wo bacche jinse ma dur ja rahi hai ya wo ma jiske bacche choot rahe hain, kitne vivash honge. Bht hi accha chitran kiya hia aapne Sapna. :)

[sapna sagar]

shukriya nazia....pr ye sach hai ki mere liye ye ek durghatna hi thi....mai to unhe janti bhi nhi,...pr zariya mai ban gayi ........

[Maumil Mehraj]

very sad! har ek insaan ko kabhi na kabhi jaana hi hota hai, aapne is baat ko bohat ache se pesh kia hai.
Ek maa ke dil pe kya guzarti hogi, jab use apne bachin se door jaana hota hoga...very deep and emotional.
Maumil

[sapna sagar]

thank u maumil........meri baat or un bhavnao ko samajhne k liye.

[Rajat malik]

Chinta mat kijiye koi bhi galti nahi hai :)
Ye ek bahut hi rulane waali poem hai in fact meri aankho mein to aansu aa gaye ise padhkar....
Aapne is tarah haqeekat ko darshaya hai ki haqeekat bhi yahan par jhoot lag raha hai....

[Rajat malik]

Kabhi kabhi rona bhi sehat ke liye accha Hota hai :) vaise main ab thik hu
Aur aap sorry mat boliye aapne itna accha likha hai aapke wirds ki wajah se main thoda senti ho gaya tha...
Thanks for the compliment