PHIR KYA?

hum sabhi ek baat to sochate hi hain ki ye to hua,ab iske baad kya.jivan chakra bhi kuch aisa hi to hai....

paida huey,bade huye,

phir uske baad kya?

pdh likh gaye,kuch bann gaye,

phir uske baad kya?

shaadi hui,pariwaar bna ,

phir uske baad kya?

di parvarish buddhe huye,

phir uske baad kya?

aashrit huye ,phir marr gaye ,

ab uske baad kya?

phir se chalega chkr yahi ,

tb uske baad kya?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[nazia]

Subah hoti hai shaam hoti hai, zindagi yun hi tamam hoti hai.. Hum to bas rozgaar ki bhag daud me hi saara samay nikal dete hain. Asal arth to koi samajh hi nahi paata is jeevan ka. Par aapne kya khoob samjhaya hai. bht hi badhiya :)

[sapna sagar]

shukriya....bahot bahot

[Maumil Mehraj]

wakai hum zindagi is soch me guzar dete hain ki ab aur kya karna hai, is se hamare jeevan me na toh sukoon rehta hai aur na hi khushiyaan...aapne is kavita ke zariye ye khoobsoorti se samjhaaya hai...
I loved it.
Maumil

[sapna sagar]

thanks ........thank u so much....

[Rajat malik]

Mujhe lagta hai ki hame kabhi bhi ye nahi sochna chahiye ki 'uske baad kya' kyuki jitna vaqt hum ye sochne me vyatit karte hai usse accha Hota ki humne kuch kaam kar liya Hota....mujhe lagta hai ki hame apne present me jeena chahiye

[sapna sagar]

aap thik keh rahe hain mai to sirf ek lamhe ki baat kr rhi thi jb aap sb kuch krk aakhri samye pr apne jivam ka aanklan karte hai ....tb ye baat shayad aapko himmat hi deti ki ....picture abi khatam nhi hui dost.....fir se ana abhi baaki hai.......

[Rajat malik]

Aapki raaye bilkul sahi h bilkul Aapki soch ki tarah......

[sapna sagar]

apni raaye aapne di aap soch bhi n sakte mujhe kitni khushi hui....kyonki aisi baat wahi kr sakta hai jisne sach me meri kaviya ko samaye diya ho.....so thank u sooooo much dil se.....

[Rajat malik]

You are welcome..... Dil se

[sapna sagar]

ab kya bolu!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Rajat malik]

Kuch bhi.....hamesha ki tarah

[sapna sagar]

maana mai zyada bolti hun pr basanti n hu.....kabhi kabhi samne walon ko bhi mouka de hi deti hu.....

[Rajat malik]

Aur agar saamne walon ke paas kuch bolne ke liye na ho to???
tab to aapko hi bolna padega na!!!!

[sapna sagar]

kya aap meri baatein sunte rahenge?or aisa kaise ho sakta hai?app kuch bhi n bolenge......

[Rajat malik]

Chalo batao kya bolu.....aapko Jo puchna hai puchiye

[sapna sagar]

puchhna to kuch bhi nhi.

[Rajat malik]

Oh!!!! chalo aap hi apne baare me kuch bata do

[sapna sagar]

maine abhi ek real moment share kia apni kavita me.....aap pdhiyega to batayiega.

[Rajat malik]

okkk!!! jaroor

[sapna sagar]

ok bye....cut to go....aapko jb b thoda sa waqt mile to aap zarur nazar daliyega mrei bhi kavita pr....galtian hongi pr likhti rahungi tbi to seekhungi....

[Rajat malik]

Haan bilkul theek
vaise mujhe nahi lagta ki aapki poem me galtiyan hai.....
Bye.......

[sapna sagar]

gud nite......uhi likhte rahiye mast rahiye.....

[Rajat malik]

Okk....good night....
apna khayal rakhna....

[sapna sagar]

THANK U .....U TOO.