kinaare

kash leharein or kinara apna rishta samjh pate.

kinaare seh bhi lete hain or zakhmi bhi hote hain...

lehrein aatin to hain......daaman bhigoti bhi hain,

pr jb tk wo thaame.....chali bhi jaati hain,

kaash unhe ye ehsas bhi ho...

WO BHI UNKA APNA HAI...

kinare hain to nadi hai manmaani si,

nhi ti saagar hai ......or lehrein hain soonami si,

Reviews

[Penny]

Ek nazm nahin yeh ek ehsas hai Jo ahista se dil Ko chhoo jata jai, bilqul ek lever ki tarah. Bahot khoob. Ek base phir aapne Sahil ki keemat yaad diladi sabko.

[sapna sagar]

thank u penny...mujhe laga hi nhi tha k aap hindi bhi pdhte honge....aapko pasand i so shukriya....

[Penny]

My pleasure... Humein Hindi bhi aati h air lakhnawi hone me kaaran Urdu bhi..

[Rajat malik]

Aapki Hindi laajawab hai....Aapki kavita ne mera mann moh liya

[nazia]

Sabse zyada accha to yahan hindi kavita padh kar lagta hai.. itna gehraa aur khoobsoorat lekh hum tak pahunchane k liye bht bht shukriya.. amazing write :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

You write beautiful poetry...bohat khoob!

[sapna sagar]

shukriya...........!!!!