UMMEED

umeed khud ko vishwas dene ka naam hi to hai

jab haath pakad kar aapko ummeed se koi dekhe hai

wo ootra mukkh geeli aankhe kyo apni oar yun khiche hai

vishwaas karo mai sachcha hun

bda ho gaya pr bachcha hu

ek baar koi umeed to de

ek baar koi to ye keh de

tu aage badh mai saath tere

or dekhna sab ho jayega

sab kuch achcha ho jayega

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Penny]

Don't know..Sorry to say ma'am but the rhythm disturbs me, rest the message is good and so is the language. Keep writing..

[Maumil Mehraj]

Bohat khoob likha hai aapne...wakai umeed ho toh sab acha ho jaata hai.
Maumil

[sapna sagar]

shukriya maumil....aapne meri kavita pe dhyaan diya....aapka naam bahot achcha hai...iska arth jaan sakti hun?

[Maumil Mehraj]

ye Arabic bhasha ka shabd hai...Maumil ka matlab "patience" ya "sabr" hai :)

[sapna sagar]

kya khoob! tb to aap pr ye naam khoob jachega....aap writer jo ho gaye hain..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

behtareen.....
koi bharosa jatata hai to sab saral ho jaata hai...
khoobsurat abhivyakti....
bahot badhaayi!!!
:)

[sapna sagar]

mai kaise aapka shukriya ada karun....aapne such me meri kavitayein pdhi.....mere liye bahot badi baat hai.thank u...so so much.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

swagat hai aapka.....par aapko thanks bolne ki jarurat nhi hai.......!!! :) :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

tabiyat jara nasaaj thi kuch dino se........aur exams bhi hai isliye abhi kam najar aa raha tha.......

[sapna sagar]

koi baat nhi....aap jaldi se achhe ho jayiye or exams b achhe se dijiye ...thik hai mai filhaal aapko pareshan n karti aap aaram kijiye....get well soon.....god bless u....hmesha...