soch

kalam ki bhi apni soch ho sakti hai.

kuch shabd to mann me ate hain,

phir fisal fisal se jate hain,

liya samet is koshish me,ki,

kuch to likh hi daalungi,

jaise hi baithati hu likhne, 

wo bikhar bikhar se jate hain,

bahot socha bahot samjha,

tab ja ke akl me baat pdi,

ye kalam ajab mann rakhti hai,

natmastak ho tb likhti hai,

tb priye sakhi si lagti hai,

jo bhi socho wo likhti hai,

tb shabd jo mann me ate hain,

kagaz pe utar hi jate hain,

ye kalam hamari shakti hai,

ye lekhan hai hum likhte hain,

ye lekhan hai hum lekhak hain,

ye kalam ajab mann rakhti hai,ye kalam nhi ye bhakti hai......

Author's Note

?{kalam}=pen

Reviews

[Mamta Vashisht]

"Ye kalam nhi bhakti h" ...love this line. To every writer writing is spiritual. Beautiful poem sapna ji

[sapna sagar]

thank u mamta g.... aapka itna kehna hi mere liye bahot mayne rakhta hai...

[Penny]

Kamaal ki Khalam. Bahot unda..

[sapna sagar]

thank u penny....thank u so much.

[Penny]

My pleasure

[Rajat malik]

A nice and talented work....
I loved it:) wish I would have wrote it so nicely

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

हम �™िखने वा�™े चाहते हैं कोई हमें पढे हमारी सराहना करें । यह दोनो चीजें हमें आनंद देती हैं । आगे �™े जाती हैं । �™ेकिन किसी की सजँनातमक टीका हमें चोटी पर पहूँचाती हैं । आप की संवेदना को दि�™ से स�™ाम । मेरे सवा�™ का जवाब का ईंतेजार हैं ।

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

हम �™िखने वा�™े चाहते हैं कोई हमें पढे हमारी सराहना करें । यह दोनो चीजें हमें आनंद देती हैं । आगे �™े जाती हैं । �™ेकिन किसी की सजँनातमक टीका हमें चोटी पर पहूँचाती हैं ।

[Pushkar Prabhat]

bahot ache........
kalam sach me bhakti hai......hum bhakt......
lekakh aur kalam ke rishte ki sunder wyakhyaan.
bahot badhaayi.....
:)

[sapna sagar]

dhanywaad pushkr....mujhe khushi hoti hai aapke review per....aap plz mrei kamiyan bhi bataya kariye taaki mai aaj ke hisaab se sudhar sakun.maine aapki bahut saari poems padhi or wo sabhi nayi soch rakhti hai or isiliye sabse itni jaldi connect b ho jaati hai....jyada tr english me hi likhte pr kamaal likhte hain.eng me poetry creation is not my cup of tea,so mujhe hindi hi bhati hai.
haan padhti sab hu . meri help kijiye ki mai apni kavitao ko kaise secure kr skti hun

[Pushkar Prabhat]

vishwaas kijiye......aap mujhse bahot behtar likhti hain......hindi mujhe bhi bhaati hai......bahot din se hindi me kuch nhi likha.....jald hi kuch likhunga.......
agar mujhe aapki behtareen kavitaaon me kuch kami najar aayegi to mai jarur bataunga.......aapse bhi yahi gujaarish hai..... :) :)

[sapna sagar]

maine aapki sabhi rachnayein padhi hai eng bhi....per aapki hindi ka to jawaab n.mai aapki hindi kavitaon ka intzar zarur karungi.