sapna

zehen me kuch sapne palte hi ehte hain

Kya aisa ho sakta hai jo socha pura ho jaye

kuch pal jina jaise chaha wo chahat puri ho jaye

jo jiya nhi ji sakte the wo sapna pura ho jaye...

jo chaha or unchaha sa

jo na jana pehchana sa

jo apna hai apna bhi nhi

wo sab apna sa ho jaye

jo jiya nhi ji sakte the wo sapna pura ho jaye.....

jo mere apne under hai

jo dikha bhi hai per dikha nhi

jo sath nhi jo paas nhi

wo apna apna ho jaaye

jo jiya nhi ji sakte the wo sapna pura ho jaye...

haan aisa ho sakta hai ummid na chhodo tum khud se

khud ko itna...bada kar do har sapna chhota ho jaye

jo jiya nhi ji sakte the wo sapna pura ho jayega......

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Maumil Mehraj]

another beautiful work from you...aapne sapne ke baare me likha hai aur aapka naam bhi sapna hai :) Aakhir ki lines mujhe bohat pasand aayi,
"khud ko itna...bada kar do har sapna chhota ho jaye
jo jiya nhi ji sakte the wo sapna pura ho jayega......" very inspirational
Maumil

[Saddam]

Bahut umda hai ye sabdon ka sath aur khubsurati se piroya hai motiyo ko.
Bahut achha laga pad kar.

[Rajat malik]

Tum bada hi acchaa likhti ho :)
It was an inspirational one....mujhe to bahut pasand aaya

[sapna sagar]

dhanyawaad....mere paas shbd n kya kahu....mai sirf likhti hun jb aap achha kehte hai to lagta hai k sach me likhti hun.

[Rajat malik]

Yehi to ek lekhak ki pehchaan hoti hai, balki ye sabki pehchaan hoti h
jab hum koi kaam karte hai tab ham itna jyada uska dhyaan nahi dete lekin jab koi us kaam ki taarif karta hai tab hame us kaam ki asli ehmiyat pata chalti hai....

[sapna sagar]

aap bilkul thik keh rahe hain mai nayi hu na.....shayad isliye darr jati hu ki kaisa likha hoga...

[Rajat malik]

Main bhi naya hu lekin meri maano to kabhi bhi kisi cheez se darna mat, hamara. darr cheejo ko aur bhaari bana deta hai.....Shaant Mann se raho aur socho ki sab theek hai balki ye socho ki isse accha ho hi nahi sakta

[sapna sagar]

ok....mai apne uper bharosa karne ki puri koshish karungi.......shukriya mujhe itna tym dene k liye...mujhe achha laga aap se baat krk...ummid karti hu aap uhin meri kavitao pr review dete rahenge taaki mai apni galtian sudhar saku.

[Rajat malik]

Main pakka aapki madad karunga,
mujhe bhi aapse baat krke apnapan sa mehsoos hua...

[sapna sagar]

thank u soooo much.....

[Rajat malik]

You are welcome :)☺☺☺

[sapna sagar]

so sweet of u.....thank u.

[Rajat malik]

Once again, welcome

[sapna sagar]

ab kya kahu......

[Rajat malik]

Jo kuch Mann me hai keh daalo

[sapna sagar]

aapne aj jo bhi samjhaya uska parinaam dekiye...pdhiye ...aap samjh jayenge .....ki maine kitna seriously liya aapki baato ko...

[Rajat malik]

Sach bata raha hun ye meri zindagi ka ek bada hi yaadgaar din rahega kyunki meri wajah se kisi ke housle buland ho gaye, isse behtar kya ho sakta hai......
P.S. - Maine tumahri kavita padh li

[sapna sagar]

i know......thank u...

[Rajat malik]

You are welcome again (for the third time)

[sapna sagar]

gud nite.........

[Rajat malik]

Gud nite......felt great after talking with you..... will be waiting tomorrow also after 10 p.m.

[Penny]

Again.. A very beautiful piece. Nice choice of words. Keep writing.

[sapna sagar]

thanks aap mera likha pasand kark mujhe kitni khushi dete hain mai bta n sakti.....shukriya...

[Penny]

Humein aapki nazm padhke kitni khhushi hoti hai him bhi bayaan nahin kar sakte..

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

I am unable to send the friendship request through the website mechanism . Pl accept the same directly .

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

I am sorry thru internet mechanism . Please accept my friendship request directly thru this msg.

[trishala tripathi]

The speciality of your poem is that you write and potray the human feelings and emotions in a beautiful manner. Dreams do play a very important role in our life and each and every person as some or the other dreams. I have recently written a blog post on dreams http://trishalatripathi.blogspot.in/ It would be really nice of you to have a look.Thank you.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

"khud ko itna...bada kar do har sapna chhota ho jaye"
bahot bahot bahot khoobsurat!!!!
kitni achchi aur sachchi baat hai......
hausla karo to kuch bhi mushkil nhi......
koi aasmaan ucha nhi....

bahot badhaayi!!!
:)

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Sorry । I could not review your poem due to some technical problems . Sapno sev bade hone ki baat badi achchhi lagi aur alag bhi lagi । Well done again. It 's a good successful attempt . Kya sapna ko friend banane ka sapna mujhse chhota tha ya bada ? Will appreciate your sincere comments .

[sapna sagar]

mai aapki sari lekhni pdhti hun sir.

[sapna sagar]

aap meri nyi kavita zarur padhiyega....aap mere kon se reply ki baat kr rhe hain.

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Sapna ko friend banane ka sapna mujh se chhota hain ya bada ?

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Please review my stories - ' Good bye my dad ' , ' Minoo Master ' , ' Dowry ' , 'Second Childhood '.

[sapna sagar]

sure sir.......