papa lo mai badi ho gayi.

aaj mere papa ka jnmdin hai.....tha kahu ya phir kya kahu....kai saal huye wo mere saath nhi hain.unke jaane ke baad ehsas hua ki ab mai chhoti nhi....kisi bade ka saaya jb aapke uper se uthta hai to

haath nhi wo chhatr tha....

saath nahi kuch samaye ka tha wo......

lagta jaise sadi ho gayi......lo papa mai badi ho gayi.

aap bade they mere pita the...

mai khud ko samjhi thi chhoti...

duniya mujhko lagti khoti...

tareh tareh ke bhaye dikhlati...

sannate me mujhe darati...

           or mai.......

aapke anubhav se thi jeeti..

aapke kaandhe pe thi roti...

ssath aapke hasti rehti...

wo hansi na jaane kahan kho gayi... lo papa mai badi ho gayi.....

bhali thi chhoti chehek rhi thi...

saaye me kuch seekh rahi thi...

kyonker saath aapne chhoda..

beech bhawar me bandhan toda...

          or mai...

bahut sameta maine khud ko..

fir bhi aisa lagta mujhko..

is maala ki kadi kho gayi....lo papa mai badi ho gayi.

Author's Note

bas jo bhaav aya likh dia...ab aap batao..

Reviews

[hardeep sabharwal]

Bahut hi khoobsurat, kit I saadgi aur emotions ha is kavita me, bahut Umda

[sapna sagar]

aapne meri kavita ko saraha mere liye bahut maayne rakhta hai..aaj kal log english hi padhte or likhte hain aise mai hindi ki sarahna jb milti hai to bahot achha lagta hai....dhanywaad hardeep ji....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

bahot sunder.....
har kisi ke jeevan me pita ka bahot mahatwa hota hai......
pita ko aarpit dil ko chune waali kavita.....
bahot badhaayi!!!
:)

[sapna sagar]

Bahot bahot dhanyawaad dil se....jb aap log batate hain tabhi pata chalta hai ki prayas thik tha..than q pushkar...