kya soachti hun?

kabhi koi koshish to kare ki kavita ki patra kya soch rhi hogi?

KAASH! TUM YE SOCH PAATE MAI KYA SOACHTI HUN,

AANKHO SE DHUND KA JO PARDA UTHATE,

TO SOCH PAATE MAI KYA SOCHTI HUN.......,

MERA DARD TUM APNI AANKHON ME PAATE ,

TO YE JANTE KI MAI KYA SOCHTI HUN,

KHIDKI SE BAARISH KI BOONDON KO APNE,

CHEHRE PR LETE OR MEHSUS KARTE,

TO JAAN JAATE MAI KYA SOCHTI HUN......

LOG TO KUCH NA KUCH KEHTE HI REHTE,

AAROPON KA ROPAN KARTE HI REHTE,

KISI THHEEKARE SE JO MUJHKO BACHATEY,

TO YE JAANTE KI MAI KYA SOCHTI HUN,.......

KABHI MUJHKO BHI APNE DIL ME BASAATE

 TO KHUD JAANTE K MAI KYA SOCHTI HUN...

 MERE SOCHNE KA JO FARK PADTA TUM PR,

TO YE POOCHHATE KI MAI KYA SOCHTI HUN............

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ayank Chourasia]

Amazing mam i loved it! keep it up

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

very good . this makes me feel that you are a very experienced poetess . It is very difficult to feel the pain behind . What else one could say . go ahead .

[sapna sagar]

thank you sir...aap hamesha taarief karenge to mai seekhungi kaise?critic hi sbse achha dost hota hai.........

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Jab koi bhi cheez achchhi lage to uski tariff karna hi sabse badaa criticism hota hain . Aap ko sikhne ki koi jaroor nahin hain. Poetry aap ke khoon mein hain. Writer ki beti hain. Aur saath mein hum jaise writer friend ki best wishes hain . Aap ki poetry kaa main apni kahani mein aap ki anumati ke saath use karoonga . Aap bane rahiye.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

bahot bahot khoobsurat........
dil se likhi dil me seedhe utar gayi.......
pehchaan aur pyaar maangti kavita....
madad ko pukaarti kavita.....
bahot badhaayi............!!!
:)

[sapna sagar]

thanks pushkar.....umr km hai pr shabdo se khelna ata hai tumhe....god bless u.go ahead.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

bahot shukriya...........!!! :) :)