Ehsaas

jb sb kuch achchha lgta hai....

NAYA NAYA SA UGA HAI SOORAJ,

NAYI NAYI SI HAWA CHALI,

NAYE HAI SAPNE NAYI NAYI MAIN,

HR BAAT LAGE HAI NAYI NAYI,

HAWA SOORAJ SAPNE BATEYIEN,

PAANI BAGIYA BIJLI BADRI,

KUCH BHI BADLA NHIN HAI PAGLI,

TU HI LAGTI NAYI NAYI.

Author's Note

KAISI HAI?

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

ha ha bahot badhiya......
pyaari si kavitaa....
bachcho ki si shararat.......
bahot badhaayi!!!
:)

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

It is very interesting and inspiring.

[sapna sagar]

thank you sir aap aise hi mera honsla badhate rahiye mai koshish karti rahungi achha likhne ki...aap padhiyega zarur jaane kyun per lagta hai aap se bahut kuch seekh na hai.seekhayeinge?

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Why not with great pleasure । But writers are created whereas poets are born. So they Could be a better teachers to authors like me . still you are always welcomed.

[sapna sagar]

than you sir.sir mai ek writer ki beti hun ...mai ye to n janti ki aapne kabhi unhe padha b hai ya n ....aj wo mere saath n pr unki seekh unki yaadein ab b taaza hai.unka naam shree prem bajpayee tha...sorry sir writers to mar k bhi nhi marte..mai sabhi writer ki bahot izzat karti hun..

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

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