girhein

zindagi ki girhon ko kholna aasan nhi hota.

KITNI HASRATEIN KITNI BAATEIN KITNI ZIRHEIN HOTI HAIN,

IS CHHOTE SE NAAZUK DIL ME KITNI GIRHEIN HOTI HAIN,

KITNI GIRHEIN KHOL LI MAINE KITNI AB BHI BAAKI HAIN,......

JAANE KITNA SAMYE LAGEGA DIVAS BITATE JATE HAIN,

KABHI KABHI IN GIRHON PR BHI PARDE PADTE JAATE HAIN,

KITNE PARDE KHOL CHUKI HUN KITNE AB BHI BAAKI HAIN,......

SAARI GIRHEIN SAARE PARDE SB TO YAHIN REH JAANE HAIN,

NAADAAN E DIL NISHCHHAL HO JA SB KHALI HAATON JAANEIN HAIN.

Author's Note

KYA MERI KOSHISH THIK HAI?

Reviews

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Koshish hi badhti huyee zindagi ko chalati hain use kamyabi ki manzil tak pahuchati hain.

[sapna sagar]

mere paas shbd kamm ho jate kya kahu sir bs dhanyawaad.....

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Shabdo ki kami nahin hoti. Dhoondh ne se shabdo ki line lag jayegi. Akash mein jitne tare hain usse bhi kai guna shabd Mil jayege. Bina shabd kavita ya kahani koi mayna nahi rakhte. Hamari sab se badi poonji hoti hain woh shabd hain usike jariye hum aapni batein kah pate hain apne ya doosr ki pida ko express kar sakte hain . Ek achchhI dictionary bhi hamara sabse bada tools hota hain. Baki rahi aap ki poems ki. Woh sachmuch tarife qabil hain. Thanks

[sapna sagar]

thank you sir.....

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Maine khash aap ke liye ek gujarati poet ki kavita ka hindi anuwad bheja hain. Aap use padhiyega .zaroor bahut kutch sikhayega. Meri kahaniyo ke valued reviews ka intezar hain.

[sapna sagar]

kavita mujh tak pahunchi nhi hai jb milegi mai zarur dhyaan dungi sir....

[sapna sagar]

abhi maine jo likha usey bataiye na sir...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

behat safal prayaas.......
khoobsurat......
:)

[sapna sagar]

thank you.aap ka safal prayas kehna mere liye bahot mayene rakhta hai.