UMMEED SE ZYADA

UMMEED SE ZYADA MILTA HAI TO BAHOT ACHHA LAGTA HAI.

PAPA KI EK OONGLI THAMUN HAATH BDHA DETEY THE WO,

MUMMY SE JB THAPKI MAANGU GODD BDHA DETI THI WO,

BAALON ME FERTEY HUYE OONGLIAN "BADI HO JA" KAHA KARTIN THI WO,

"BADI TO HUN "KEHKR JB MAI UNSE ITHALATI THI,

PUNJE KE BL UNCHI HOKER LAMBI SI HO JATI THI,

MAA HASTI THI ZOR ZOR SE,PER MAI SHARMA JATI THI,

MERA SABSE APNA RISHTA KITNA SACHCHA LAGTA THA,

MAI CHHOTI THI BACHAPN THA PR KITNA ACHCHHA LAGTA THA,

BHAI SE APNI SAARI CHIZEY JB BHI MAINE BAANTI THI,

APNI TO KHATEY HI THE MERI BHI CHATT KR JAATEY THE,

TAB TO NAHI SAMAJHTI THI ROTI THI CHILLATI THI,

PR AAJ SOACHTI HUN SAB KUCHH TO KITNA ACHCHHA LAGATA HAI,

UMMEED SE ZYADA MILTA HAI TO KITNA ACHCHHA LAGTA HAI.

KHALI JEEVAN KE PANNO ME YOON RANG BHARE TUMNE AAKAR,

JEEVAN ME YOON RASS GHOL DIA OR CHHALAK RAHI SUKH KI GAAGAR,

ITNA TO SOCHA BHI NA THA, NA CHAH KABHI KI THI MAINE ,

PYAR MILA ITNA TUMSE,MUJHE APNA HISSA LAGTA HAI,

UMMEED SE ZYADA MILTA HAI TO KITNA ACHCHHA LAGTA HAI.

Author's Note

WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT IT?

Reviews

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

खुश नसीब हैं वह �™ोग जिन को उम्मीद से कई गुना अधिक मि�™ जाता हैं । �™ेकिन ऊन �™ोगों का कया जिसकी उम्मीद ही दामन छोड जाती हैं ।

[sapna sagar]

arey sir .....ichchhaein kabhi nhi marti,ummeed ka caaman koi n chhodta,saans lena koi n bhulta.

[sapna sagar]

aap meri do nayi kavitaon ko bhi padhiyega pls.

[Ajay]

Dear M'am

This poem mesmerize me the Childhood days. of course it is a good poem and heart fully written.

[sapna sagar]

ofcourse...dis poetry is connected to me and every1 can connect wid dis easily....thank you a ton..!!!!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

atisundar........
sach hai....umeed se jyaada milta hai to kitna achaa lagta hai......
behad bhaavuk kavita.....
bahot badhaayi!!!
:)

[sapna sagar]

thanq pushkar..aap ne meri rachna k liye samye nikala or review b diya.it means a lot.

[saksham]

bohat umdaa...

khoa hua milta hai tak or accha lagta hai,
UMMEED SE ZYADA MILTA HAI TO KITNA ACHCHHA LAGTA HAI.

[sapna sagar]

thanx .aapko achchhi lagi...usse b achchha ye k aapne apni b lines bna di.

[saksham]

He he sab aap bado ka ashirwad hai.. . Apki hi kripa hai sab

[sapna sagar]

thnx saksham..... meri kripa?arey aap khud kkbil hain to shrey khud ko hi dena chahiye.ashirwaad sdaiv hai.

[saksham]

Thank you so much