Anubhav

Din bitane ke sath sath anubhav ka taal mail hai jeevan.

JAANE KITNE DIN BEETEY HAIN,

JEEVAN DHEERE SE REETEY HAI,

RETT PE DHANSTEY PAANV KE JAISE,

PAL BHAR CHHAAP CHHODTA KAL,

EK AANDHI JO AAJ KI AAYI.

EK EK PAL KAL ME BEETEY HAI,

                                    JAANEY KITNE DIN BEETEY HAIN 

                                    JIVAN DHEEREY SE REETEY HAI,

DO PAIRR BHI KUM LAGTE THEY ,

ITNA CHALNA BAAKI THA,

DUM TO THAK KE CHOOR HO GAYA,

PHIR BHI HONSALA BAAKI THA,

WAHI PAIRR AB KSHINN HO GAYE,

SAHARE CHHADI ME TABDEEL HO GAYE,

PHIR BHI CHALNA BAAKI HAI,

JAHAN PYAR KI CHHANV MILE HAI WAHI PE YE JA BAITHE HAI,

JAANE KITNEY.................

AANKHO PER JO CHADHE THEY CHASHME JISME SB KUCHH DIKHHE THA,

OOTREY CHASHME JO AAJ ABHI SB SAAF SAAF SA DIKHHE HAI,

JAANE KITNEY DIN BEETEY HAIN JEEVAN DHEERE SE REETEY HAI.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

bahot khubsurat.....
dard.....umeed.....himmat ki kavita.....
jeewan hamesha ek jaisa nhi rehta.......no to khushi hamesha rehti hai......hamesha gum bhi to nhi rehta.....
aage badhne ka naam hi jeewan hai.....
bahot badhaayi.....
:)

[sapna sagar]

is chhoti si umr me itni gambhirta dekh kr aashchrya hota hai....bs duayein hi de sakti hu....hmesha aise hi rehna...hamesha kamyaab rho.or than q so much..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

bahot shukriya........

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

Very good . God blessing and keep on going ahead and ahead removing thorns from your path so that it cannot hurt any body .

[sapna sagar]

thank you sir...keep praising me... :) it strenghthens me to write more...