Dreamers

Dreams and the effects

Dreamers

As the day passes the night comes signaling us to sleep…
In our dreams we see everything we desire…
Or fear the most…
Life is of that way in the eyes of the few…
Dreams are reflected from your mind…
Life is reflected from your actions…
When you see someone sad…
Don’t you wonder what they think…dream?
All of us have our days where we want to release the rain from are eyes…
But when night comes and are emotions from the day carries on how would our dreams be???
So when you’re sad and your eyes focus on the thorns of the rose instead of its beauty…
Remember that your dreams, where all your desires can happen…
Will only turn out as the nightmares we dread…

Author's Note

i didnt really pay attention to grammer

Reviews

[Helena]

This was truly beautiful and would be sure to win a place in a contest for "Dreams"
but I'm sorry my friend I did not make it clearer on "Keeping the Dream" alive
contest that this was a "phrase" contest whereby the below phrase had to be
included in the poem.

"AT NIGHT I LET MY PET THE MOON
RUN FREELY INTO THE SKY MEADOW"

Is it possible for you to include this somewhere in your poem to be considered
for an award. If you don't want to alter your wonderful poem I fully understand.

Thank you so much for "Keeping the Dream Alive" ~ Helena :)

[Tovli]

a beautiful poem--sorry the phrase wasn't there--but there is still time. write a new one! tovli

[angelina neves]

Beutiful! "So when you're sad and your eyes focus on the thorns of the rose instead of its beauty�" - i have the saying : you can be sad because roses have thorns or you can be amazed because thorns have roses - and i always try to be amazed with the magic of thorns having roses!

[Caleb Benton]

Interesting piece you have here. I like how you've pointed out the fact that our emotions dictate what we dream. Actually, I believe that our emotions dictate everthing about our lives. Say you are in a grocery store and your soul mate walks past. I hope you are in a good enough mood to notice and speak to that person.

[Wynter Stinehome]

even though u didnt pay attention to gramer(i dont either) i think its really good i like it