Captured

I was trying to write in a different way, and once again, it's something dark. A captor and his captive, man and woman.

Captured

By Alasse Fefalas

 

Hands
White and cold
 

Trapped
Secure and immovable
 

Face
Wet and contorted
 

Sweating
Slow and uncomfortable

 

 

He smiles evilly
relishing her torture
 

He faces her
watching her cry
 

He holds her
Whispering sweet nothings
 

He laughs sadistically
Enjoying her fear

 

 

Her arms are aching
Bound behind her

 

Chill air surrounds her
Wet clothes freezing
 

Captor stands before her
Victimizing her embarassment
 

Her patience running
Waiting for saviour

Author's Note

Experimental. Any comments?

Reviews

[Shelby Taylor]

Very nice loved it

[Maria F. Rojas]

Very nice, I like how you write this. Something different than poems that are commons.

[Jordy]

This was really good. I liked how different it was from normal poems. There's really nothing you can improve on; its excellent.

[Eagle Cruagh]

The sex part sounds sort of weird, it is probably about
some kind of perversion.
The form and function of the write is very pleasant, it may
even be extraordinary.
Nice writing !
---- Eagle Cruagh