why my family is the greatest?

why my family is the greatest?

A Story by sanya

WHY MY FAMILY IS GREATEST?
My family is greatest because my mom understands me when no one else understands. She gave birth to me, because of her I came in this world. She taught me everything. My dad and my mom forget their wishes s to fulfill mine. They did all things they could do to make me happy and they succeeded. They made me the world ’s most happiest child .I am the luckiest child on the whole earth as I have the best family ever .. I have a lovely, kind   , understanding best mom. Her good things will never end and her bad deeds  will never start .My dad is same like that he is bold, trustworthy, awesome ,great, perfect. He just wants to make all of us happy   , he wants a smile on our faces every time. My brother however is naughty but loves me a lot   . At school or at home he is with me forever. I am the luckiest as I have such a loving and caring family whom I love more than myself.

© 2013 sanya


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sanya
this is an essay

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You are lucky to have such a loving family, and they are lucky to have you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Nice piece. i liked it.

Your poem reflects how so many of us feel nowadays!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sanya

11 Years Ago

pleasure to have wonderful comments ................but it is an essay not a poem

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sanya
sanya

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HI ALL! I AM SANYA. I AM A SIXTH CLASS STUDENT SO DON'T EXPECT ANY GOOD PIECE OF WRITING FROM ME . I LOVE TO READ , WRITE AND TALK more..

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