my naughty brother

Ohh ho my brother is troubling me again

All my mother explained is gone in  vain

He is my friend, my bodyguard, my teacher and above all he is my brother

 In times of difficulty he gives me advice and  helps me like my mother

 However my brother is naughty he loves me a lot

He saves me by any how when I am caught

My brother is  a gift to me from god

He is calmer than the water in the pond

Author's Note

i know these are short but these are my old ones .Whenever i will write a new poem then i will make it long

Reviews

[Marie]

A poem doesnt have to be long to be good. I like the way you write about your brother, but you need to work on the last line. You can do better than "He is calmer than the water in the pond."

[sanya]

thank u for ur time