Friends

Friends

A Poem by sanya

LIFE without friends is such a bore

Which makes us very sore

For me friends are my souls

Yes sometimes I fight but without them I can’t achieve my goals

Friends are cute and nice

They are very caring  and wise

They are the best

And they never want to take your test ……………………………………

© 2013 sanya


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Work on your grammar and punctuation. Again, use a wider range of vocabulary. Other than that I really enjoyed reading this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sanya

11 Years Ago

thanks will try to do better
Enjoyed reading your work....was eager to read more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sanya

11 Years Ago

thanks for giving me ur time
Chandra.HEntertainment

11 Years Ago

Your welcome...no worries
It seems too short but very nicely written :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sanya

11 Years Ago

thanks , will work on it
Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

ok good :)

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Added on July 27, 2013
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sanya
sanya

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HI ALL! I AM SANYA. I AM A SIXTH CLASS STUDENT SO DON'T EXPECT ANY GOOD PIECE OF WRITING FROM ME . I LOVE TO READ , WRITE AND TALK more..

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