Childhood

Childhood

Childhood is very nice

It’s even better than rice

One wants to go back in childhood and play

Childhood is very precious everyone says

Childhood is full of fun and life becomes very easy

It’s just like dog who is lazy

Everyone remembers the enjoyment they had

People want childhood back without it they are very sad

Reviews

[christina]

This is a very good piece. However, try and use a wider range of vocabulary. For example, not the same word 'childhood' in every sentence. Also, the poem can be random at times so try and work on staying on the same subject. Try and use more meaningful metaphors to use in your writing.

-Christina

[sanya]

thanks a ton . I will surely try to improve

[christina]

You're welcome :)

[Akshat♥]

It is true..try to write bit more :)

[sanya]

ok will surely try