Boundless love

Admiring a flower blooming
Listening to the wasp buzzing
I slowly have learnt
To admire each moment spent

The more i think,
The more a blush!
The more i try running away,
I realize i am actually moving closer

As i try to decode emotions,
Astonished i am by my thoughts and actions
How and when did your soul merged with mine
In the eons of time, when did hearts unite..

Meeting you was my destiny,
But holding on you is my choice
I wish this phase to continues till eternity
Accross tides of time and limits set by humanity..

Reviews

[halv]

I've read this over and over again and each time I do I feel the words connect to me stronger each time. Beautiful writing, great job!

[sansrity sinha]

thank you so much :) special bond only gets stronger with time..I wrote this for that right person I have

[fadingtale]

I really love the last stanza, so beautifully written! Thank you for submitting for all about love contest!

[sansrity sinha]

thank you so much! destiny somehow hold a lot surprise that unfolds only at the right time :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Amazing...Meeting you was my destiny, But holding on you is my choice...Very mature thought. I loved this poem.

[sansrity sinha]

thank you so much :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺

[Schatzi]

Hello sansrity sinha,

Beautiful message! You have a few spelling errors, but otherwise a good poem.

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi

[sansrity sinha]

Thank you so much:)

[Emily]

Lovely wording!
I like the meaning!!
Keep it up!!

[Ashwin Shanker]

(Please always use capital I to refer to self)
The more a(It should be I right?) blush!
holding on(to) you
I wish this phase (too)[Or remove it altogether] continues till eternity.

I was actually confused between the first half of the poem and the second half. I liked the first part where you spoke about living each moment to the fullest. The second half, where you spoke about souls merging and all, Who were you referring to... Nature or someone else? (a bit confused here) :)

I loved the last stanza. The feeling of infinity is being expressed in a good way. Keep going.

[sansrity sinha]

I wrote this describing my thoughts for a very special person..the first part describes a positive outlook for things i have gained in his company while the second part describes my surprise for my changed outlook within a short span of time..I ll take care of the mistakes. Thanks for the review :)

[Ashwin Shanker]

I see you haven't made the changes. :P ...
Anyways.. Have a good day.

[Valentine]

There are some things and a few people we just can't run away from. We find ourselves running toward them. Valentine