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Deep down in my heart

Buried deep in my thoughts

I never could read my mind

Until, you asked me…

It is strange how slowly

Life transforms beautifully

Slow and steady,

Things change miraculously

With each passing moment

I want to know more

I want things to grow

Slowly yet surprisingly

I wish I could elaborate

What I feel for you,

But alas! I’m short of words

May be of a language too

Jinxed in my thoughts,

Surrounded by a realm of emotions

Short of courage, locked in shyness

I fail to confess what lies within…

So I leave things on time,

Partly also on destiny

Waiting for things to evolve

Slowly, yet beautifully.

 

Author's Note

could not fix the title yet. suggestions for title are most welcome

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

This is a beautiful write here, filled with emotion as well. nicely written....

[Alice Anderson]

"So I leave things on time,
Partly also on destiny
Waiting for things to evolve
Slowly, yet beautifully."
These lines were so beautiful, I couldn't stop reading them again and again!
I could relate so much with the feels.

[iamshadowine]

Beautifully penned down!
"So I leave things on time,
Partly also on destiny
Waiting for things to evolve
Slowly, yet beautifully."

these lines are driving me crazy, I must say!

keep writing :D

[sansrity sinha]

Haha..thank you so much ..feelings deep down my heart..

[Schatzi]

Hello sansrity sinha,

It is a good poem. Very beautifully written. The font goes with this poem so well too!

I would like to clarify one thing. In this line "I never could read my mind" you say my mind. Did you mean your mind? I ask because it seems strange that you are unable to read your own mind.

As for a title suggestion: Words Cannot Say? Just a thought . . .

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi

[sansrity sinha]

Hi schatzi,
Thank you so much for the review..yes..i meant my mind..thats what makes those feelings so special..:)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

What a lovely flow of words... "The secret confession"... i guess will be a good title to this one....very well written though... good one :)

[sansrity sinha]

Thank you so much..:)..specifically for the title..it just fits so perfectly..bith to the scenario as well the the gravity of content in the poem..

[CA Anurag Sharma]

you are welcome :) its actually very well written ....

[Valentine]

With me and my husband [now deceased] we knew each other as good friends before we knew that we loved each other. Valentine