Happiness

What makes me happy?

A tricky question!

An unending list!

A vicious circle!

For a mind like mine!

I find joy in birds chirping;

I find joy in flower blooming;

I enjoy dusk and dawn,

And I admire starry night!

I enjoy solitude;

I enjoy melancholy songs!

I enjoy group chats;

I also enjoy endless talks!

When infants laugh,

I feel the ecstasy!

When elders talk,

I feel warmth…

The world around is just so adorable;

If one has the optimism!

As beauty lies in the eyes of beholder,

Happiness lies in minds and souls!

Reviews

[1Disawsum]

Love it! The message is one we all need to have a look at every once in a while to remind us how amazing life really is. It's the attitude that counts, the attitude that changes everything. Well done, keep it up! xx

[sansrity sinha]

thank you :)

[Emily]

Lovely poem!!
Well done!!

[Riddhi]

Really nice poem and well done..Keep it up and thanks for sharing...

[sansrity sinha]

thank you so much! :)

[Vishal Suthar]

You will find happiness everywhere only if the blending of heart and mind gets contented seeing the situation...
nicely composed....

[sansrity sinha]

thank you so much!

[Caitlin Washnock]

Very pretty analogy. I love how you take everything up with such optimism. Good for you indeed! You truly see the beauty in everything around you. Keep at it (:

[sansrity sinha]

it is the attitude that makes all the difference at the end of the day i guess..that is what I wanted to present via this poem. glad that you liked it ! :)

[Krizito]

Beauty is what you write, inspiration is the perspiration born out from the pores of your poem. As long as we choose to be happy, happiness chooses to reside in us...good job Sansrity.

[sansrity sinha]

thank you so much! glad that you liked it!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

The world around is just so adorable;
If one has the optimism!
As beauty lies in the eyes of beholder,
Happiness lies in minds and souls!

So very true... lovely piece of work... enjoyed it....

[sansrity sinha]

thank you so much! :)

[Imperfection2aT]

This is a beautiful piece. Wonderful job! My only suggestion would be to change the fourth line of the second stanza; in proper English, one cannot "find rejoice" because "rejoice" is an action by itself. Other than that, you've done really well!

[sansrity sinha]

thank you so much for the review. thanks fr the correction. i will make the changes! :)

[Valentine]

This sounds like my sister and me. Give us anything in nature to look at and we love looking at it. Love babies too. More people should be thankful for the good in the world around them. Valentine