The Pain

It is poem which shows how pain is better than joy

                                                       ‘‘THE PAIN’’

Does pain bothers you the most?

Then scare it away like Carol’s ghost.

Do you also glare it as a drag?

But, it will not allow you to brag.

You can call it an agony

But, I don’t see no felony.

You say, it is filling you with grief

Don’t you know, that time will be brief.

Sometimes, it can be an absolute nuisance

But have you seen anything, that make any sense.

Your bitterness for it may grow with time 

Like some well nourished wild wine,

But, can’t you see? It allows you to hate

Those who used you as a bait.

I know, you always pray for merry times

With your jingle bells and melodious rhymes,

But, have you ever gave a thought

Ultimately, pain was the only thing you bought.

However, my pain may cause you woe

And you may look at it as your foe,

But, unlike that cruel happiness that you defend

My pain will only sprinkle pinch of joy in the end…..

Author's Note

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[¿]

Ok, my general feedback is....I liked going through it...but I didn't like the pain...dunno how someone can like that! But the agony and longing you expressed made me feel it...thanks for sharing☺

[Jgi]

Appreciate your honest words..... and thank you for giving this poem a reading.... yes no body like pain but no body can escape it..... so why not face it with a smile.....😊

[¿]

Indeed said dude! You're heartedly welcome😊!

[Yogita Jaiswal]

nice i liked it pain dard