Summer

Moonlit garden path

How delicious is the wind

Slowly drifting through

Reviews

[Michael X]

Beautifully conceptualized grasp on nature and its magical effects.. passion written in essence,
and takes the reader to another place and time..has an air of classic romance, speaking valumes

with minimal wording, yet the imagery comes to life and lends itself as an impressional portrait of
the night, being wisked away in the breeze, the floating feeling is woven with a sense of wonder,

I really enjoyed reading the detail and everything the meaning intels, keep up the great work.
Take Care, Mike

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really nice haiku...one of those moments, with the wind drifting through that alleviates a bit of the heat.

i also see two lovers drifting through a garden...slowly...like or with the wind...

well done.

jacob

[zainul]

Enlightened with pleasure
With the moonlit piece
Chuckle happily

[Angi]

Lovely, lovely Haiku. This just flows, Haruki. These suckers are hard to do, you have nailed it! Angi~

[Shadow Writer]

Beautiful and quiet as a summer evening in the garden. This was good. Phantom........

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I'm smelling honeysuckle and roses! Great piece. Very powerful short poem.

[just is]

Ah! This is ever so beuatiful, I can feel the love out pour from this.
It's very sincere. Splendid write.

[T]

Absolutely beautiful, Haruki ... Breathtaking haiku ... hugs

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Absolutely beautiful haiku! You really defined nature at its best. This is going in my favorites.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

a very breathtaking haiku... very sweet and enjoyable.

[Gandré]

Tis was a great Haiku... my images are widely spread ....such an innocence here.. loved it.
be well,
l.gandr�