Wow, this is powerful. It's emotional, but straight-forward, just telling it like it is. Why is it the beautiful soul's seem to get hurt the most? If I were the one this was addressed to, I think that last stanza would hit me like someone punched me in the stomach and I would realize , even if I wanted to change, I've hurt you too much and it's too late. Strong poem! Barbara
Wow, this is powerful. It's emotional, but straight-forward, just telling it like it is. Why is it the beautiful soul's seem to get hurt the most? If I were the one this was addressed to, I think that last stanza would hit me like someone punched me in the stomach and I would realize , even if I wanted to change, I've hurt you too much and it's too late. Strong poem! Barbara
Okay, so to introduce myself- My name is Sandra and I am first and, above all else, a mother. Sliding in second is- an independent writer. I am a firm believer and follower of Christ Our Lord and a fr.. more..