Old Carriage

 

Old Carriage

Old round carriage goes ‘round day by day

Awaiting new travelers

That seeks a new path

Galloping down the road heavily, hearing their hooves down the road.

The driver a mystery

Never talks just travel with the carriage

Seeking for other travelers

Non-stop keeps going day by day

Author's Note

Just a poem that came in my mind. Didn't turn out that bad I guess, but still unsure about the horse part.

Reviews

[man Atek]

Non-stop keeps going day by day
good metaphor as conclusion
from description argue
about old carriage

write too, what your opinion about these !

[MusicHack]

Whoa. That's so cool...it reminds me of a song...but I can't remember which one :)

[Wunderlich]

I like this. It reminds me of listening to the Modest Mouse album "This Is a Long Drive for Someone with Nothing to Thinking About" whilst driving on old back roads at night.

[Lore]

So random...interesting...hard to follow