Unforgettable Girl

.describes her as mother nature?..

Dancing with the wind

Brunette hair which flows

like a willow.

Her skin the color of a sunkissed peach

soft and smooth

Her eyes match mother natures  tree trunk

strong and independent

Her lips red as a rose

nobody could break her

she's beautiful

an unforgettable goddess.

Author's Note

not quite what I wanted but it'll work for now.... till the ending..

Reviews

[anneliese]

good job. there is just something magical about nature that you captured perfectly.

[DarkMockingbird]

I really like how her description refers to nature and it really makes her seem like someone divine
I love how you describe the eyes!!
ps) thanks for the review

[Fear Corrupts!]

Well done, this is lovely. Great imagery.

Molly*