Unquestionable

Unquestionable

A Poem by Samantha Ashley*
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Don't know what to do with everything

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I hate everything about you

Except your sexy eyes

The things you do to yourself

Drive me insane

Don't know what to do with myself

Make me think crazy things

Wonder if you'd rather do those things

Other than be with me

I'm so scared of losing you

Brings me to tears

Want to set free

Free from these wretched thoughts

Tell me what to do

There's nothing I can undo

To wait for you till your through

Through with this s**t

So we can be a better fit.

© 2008 Samantha Ashley*


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Samantha Ashley*
while sitting and waiting....

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Those guys you love, to hate, the more you hate them, the more you really want them. Men are never easy to understand, at any age!! lol Good poem!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I love what's going on in the first two lines . What a great hook! They set up the highs and lows of the poem and let the reader ride along on the wave.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on December 7, 2008
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Samantha Ashley*
Samantha Ashley*

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I am 21 years old, and attending a community college. It seems like forever until I'm done with school. I love to write especially about my feelings and emotions; I try to let the reader feel what I .. more..

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