Nothingness

Nothingness

A Poem by Samwam

Down right defeated
My heart feels depleted
Im so lost i cant find my way home

Have i lived there before
I cant seem to be sure
Im so lost i cant find my way home

Black portals start forming
No fair or clear warning
I dnt know if ill find my way home

Feet parted on ground
Nothing familiar around
I fear that ive never been home

Now my world is a wreck
And feel sick to my stomach
Im drowning and wont return home

© 2014 Samwam


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I like the progression of references to home (though the first two repeat)

What is lost, never had, and will never be is what makes us sad. ( : O (

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samwam

10 Years Ago

Hey Roger. Thank you for your feedback. Its only in the third stanza that i come to realization of w.. read more
We all go through stages in life and that is one relevant one to all of us. You pen with truth and honesty...Excellent...:).................

Posted 10 Years Ago


I thank all for their feedback. It means a lot to me and enjoy your writes just as much:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


your writings are very good it shows the clear feeling of your hearts

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is deep, poignant and very touchy write, sorry about whatever you been through and your emotions are very well felt. Thank you for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sorta like a dead end road feel I know the feeling< thank you have and hold a lot of feeling within and share them I like that:)))))))))))))))))))))

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Samwam
Samwam

Cape town, western cape, South Africa



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I enjoy reading and have always hoped to have my writings read. Whether it be ,my thoughts or poems. Dream is to publish a memoir. I enjoy spending time with myself reflecting on most things in life a.. more..

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