Your beauty through my eyes

Love is but skin deep
Yet we hold onto form
I dont need ur love
Though the subconcious disagrees
A fight between who i allow to be real
Ur face holds a smile blocking all things in sight
The world does not exist except the light that u are
Ive longed for u without even knowing
I wish this to last until my last breath
Listening to ur heartbeat brings me so much peace
We share one common aspect of humanity
One love from which we were all created
As long as i see u this way
Our love could never cease

Reviews

[Samwam]

Thanks guys for your feedback. Hey G, i'm not sure what you meant by yours?! :)

[Gary H]

I enjoyed reading this and felt there was much that commented on South Africa although I'm not sure if that was your intention.

[00000000000000000000000..]

Wow I love it, Your title is awesome too, Not picking you forgot the u in beauty, its was a type ooo I am sure:)

[Courtney]

I love how simple this poem is.. How sometimes love is felt when you are not even aware of it, yet, yourself.

"The world does not exist except the light that you are"
I absolutely love that line :) Thanks for posting :) xx