Me, myself and i

fights of ego with true self

My emotions less rambunctious than can remember

Words failing to procreate from its only source

As has the motivation for expressing it left my mind

Is it to be understood as "peace" this time?

Or complete and utter numbing as not to deal?!

Perhaps, when it is time, it is time.

Human is all i physically am

Being is what i feel i am

My soul soul screams at me to read the message

As to believe it to be true

Living in the moment is what steers me closer to me

I have lost myself in unthinking thought

And pray i soon return

Reviews

[Pax]

This piece reminds me of how we handle our thoughts and feelings into words. The us in thought, the other us in feeling, the other us who keeps on refusing, the other us who keeps meddling, the other us who keeps on hoping, and many more sides of us...i guess that's all the juries in our mind.

But there is only one soul who screams, who shout a frustrated feeling, a tired feeling, a numbing feeling.. the one that feels everything, the core of our being. The one that we should attend first..

Many thoughts comes to mind about this piece, which is us - the ego, the soul... but all of that are part of us... A balance way to chose our choices in life is to listen to all and understand everything to be able to chose what's right, to what's too much, what's wrong to what's bad for us... and many more etc...

all that is what makes us more human...

very nice piece...

[Samwam]

I am happy to know you understand this. Thank you very much. I believe at times we are too hard on ourselves and forget that we are human as well.

[Pax]

yes we are... and you are welcome...

[00000000000000000000000..]

I loved this because I am seeing it again:) The reason I so love you speak the tones from within Sam:) we all will find our way back. There is a song by Coldplay cant remember how it all goes,but the end says- But when it all ends we can go back to the start :) I liked that concept:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) Not the start of another bad but a start of a new birth of within.

[A. Amos]

You are deep and elegant poet, love your work keep it up and work published yet?

[Samwam]

Thank you kindly for that. Much appreciated. No i have not had any of my love for writings published

[A. Amos]

Don't worry keep writing and consider me your strong supporter here in America to promote your work, this is how we support and make each other strong not only in work but your success is important for me, because you deserve the best.

[paddy d daly]

Is finding our self, as in our true self the most difficult thing of all, we HAVE family, we FIND friends,
but do we ever find our true self, that is what I get from what you write, enjoyed the read...