Last place I wanna be

This is the last place I wanna be,
Sitting at home all alone,
Upon my front porch,
Ready to shed some tears.

I'm all alone,
In this empty house,
I hold myself,
As I lay and tremble.

I can't stand the pain,
Of having no one,
I seem left behind,
As everyone else seems so happy.

Life is such sweet sorrow,
The suffering we must bare,
To enjoy out life,
To stay happy.

This home,
Is the last place I wanna be,
All alone,
My life is fading away to fast.

Reviews

[jjjjjjjjjjjjj]

i'm going thru this very thing i know the feeling. it's vey sad yet a very good write keep up the good work:)

[Bejn Jonathon Edwards]

I was happy to read this :)

[Jessica L. W.]

awesome

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you've clinched the soul of the lonely beautifully in the melancholy patterns of sincerity~

[Leanne Conway]

I enjoyed reading this poem, mainly because it's like so many of mine. This poem is amazing and nice, It's shows the pain and the suffering so many people go through in their lifetime weather others know or realize. Anyway, Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us. Oh by the way, First line, you put "lpace" can you fix that love?
-Lealea

[Victoria Thornton]

Considering that everybody has been in that place at some point in time, I like it. Especially the way it's written.

~!Be Your Own Hero!~

[xyourfacex]

:/ same here :.?