Last place I wanna be

This is the last place I wanna be,
Sitting at home all alone,
Upon my front porch,
Ready to shed some tears.

I'm all alone,
In this empty house,
I hold myself,
As I lay and tremble.

I can't stand the pain,
Of having no one,
I seem left behind,
As everyone else seems so happy.

Life is such sweet sorrow,
The suffering we must bare,
To enjoy out life,
To stay happy.

This home,
Is the last place I wanna be,
All alone,
My life is fading away to fast.

Reviews

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Life is such sweet sorrow,
The suffering we must bare,
To enjoy out life,
To stay happy.

I enjoyed your lines. good write. my best wishes.

[Jamal]

I enjpyed this write, I'm truly affected.

[Rea]

relatable... loneliness and suffocation are one of those few emotions that many writers find hard to pen, I love how you've painted the picture. excellent choice of words

[MetBySunlight]

This is quite true. I love it. People can relate to it. Well done! :D

[VolturiChick]

awww. i can relate to this. this was a really good poem.

[frozensakura]

this is so sad... great poem(:

[Brittany W]

So sad and true, that feeling is a feeling i've had before, you did a good job at writing this, keep penning.

[eglantine]

this just made me sad... have you tried writing a sonnet? You might be really good at that

[Scarecrow November]

This is a great write. Thank you for sharing. I think we all feel this way at some point in our lives. I'm feeling this way now. This poem is relatable to so many people.