Addiction

An addiction is building,
The torment of not seeing you,
The pain of not hearing you,
I am becoming love sick,
You are my addiction,

I close my eyes and see you,
Among a crowd of people I hear your voice,
Every second I can't speak to you,
My heart slowly withers away,
You are my addiction.

You have a better buzz then heroine,
You are more addicting then cocaine,
You are becoming my drug,
And I want to get high off your fragrence,
You are my addiction.

My barriers cave in two at a time,
Trying to stop myself,
From falling head over heels,
My heart is yours because,
You are my addiction.

You seem like an angel,
Sent down from the skys above,
To save me from my torment,
Same me from this hell,
You are my drug,
Your smell makes you irresistable,
And with in days,
You become an addiction.

Reviews

[A Risen Heroine.]

Aww this is so sweet.
I really like it.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Maimai]

I like this. Good capture of emotion (:

[Adam :P]

portrayed emotion defintly.great poem

[xyourfacex]

O: goodnesss!!!!!! i love it... I like darker such things ^3^ i love this defo a good poem owo

[XxtaintedxX]

I LOVE THIS!!! It's sppp sweet and I can definitely relate

[Amber burkett]

aww wow this is amazing you portrayed emotions well

[SilentLullabies]

Absolutely beautiful. You captured the emotions of someone longing for their lover perfectly.

[LeaflessTree]

:) I like this :D

[shoaib]

so know the feel of this .. the want and need :) aching for your lover
wow .. what a beautifully written poem
you captured the feelings so well

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

really good i luv it:)
may i ask buht who diss abt