Addiction

An addiction is building,
The torment of not seeing you,
The pain of not hearing you,
I am becoming love sick,
You are my addiction,

I close my eyes and see you,
Among a crowd of people I hear your voice,
Every second I can't speak to you,
My heart slowly withers away,
You are my addiction.

You have a better buzz then heroine,
You are more addicting then cocaine,
You are becoming my drug,
And I want to get high off your fragrence,
You are my addiction.

My barriers cave in two at a time,
Trying to stop myself,
From falling head over heels,
My heart is yours because,
You are my addiction.

You seem like an angel,
Sent down from the skys above,
To save me from my torment,
Same me from this hell,
You are my drug,
Your smell makes you irresistable,
And with in days,
You become an addiction.

Reviews

[Day Dreamer]

Wow, for the record this is the first poem I have read so far from you and it's already making me wonder if you have more awesome and quite emotional poems. I love this poem, very moving, very well written. Love it! :)

[Maddie Rae]

This was sweet.. You can really tell just how you feel

[nevershoutnever.]

Holy crap. That was amazing. This is my addiction ;) great job!

[frozensakura]

beautiful(:

[Ashley Jordan]

This is quite lovely, and very relatable. (: Good job. Love is a funny thing. To be overwhelmed in emotions can be a mystical experience! Lost in warm thoughts, everything seems a little brighter, more hopeful. Or it could become a terrible endeavor, especially if the feelings aren't reciprocated.

[jjjjjjjjjjjjj]

Save me from this hell, like that line. good write

[Bejn Jonathon Edwards]

Very powerful :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

some people affect us so profoundly~ our whole being reacts to them as if indeed they were the most adictive substance on the planet~

[Leanne Conway]

The is sweet, and beautiful, every line fits nicely with the one right beneath it. I adore this poem mainly because it's like a gift from God. Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us. It's amazing.
-LeaLea

[xoxconsuelo]

Wow, this is beautiful. Nice to meet you too:)