You Are My Angel

You Are My Angel

A Poem by samurai212

You are my angel,
You are my beautiful princess,
You are my glorious queen,
You are my beloved partner.

 

You are my angel,
You are as beautiful as a sunrise,
You are as magnificant as a summer morn',
Your as bright as the shinning sun.

 

You are my angel,
Your skin is as soft as satin,
Your eyes twinkle like the stars above,
Your smile can light up a room.

 

You are my angel,
Your touch, as soft as a newborn child,
Your body, comparable to a piece of art,
Your persoanlity, as perfect as a cherry blossom.

 

You are my angel,
Your all I could ask for,
Your as flawless as a diamond,
More priceless then the Mona Lisa,
I am lucky to have such a prize,
I hope to never lose you.

 

But have you for the rest of my life.

© 2011 samurai212


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I love how each stanza has its own theme, this is really beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The words were beautiful, with a great flow to it. :)

~Lizzard~

Posted 13 Years Ago


it so sweet. i could really feel the emotion. i love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This overflows with love and admiration...wow.

Posted 13 Years Ago


thats really good i felt like you where there saying it to me good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


amazing:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is beautiful :) I couldn't help but go "awww" You're a good writer, keep it up.
Your skin is as soft as satin,
Your eyes twinkle like the stars above,
Your smile can light up a room.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So passionate! Full of heartfelt emotions! You really know how to make a piece come alive!

Well done again!
Manda

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so sweeet :) I love it! x
This girl must be special

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's sweet and simple, I like it.

~!Be Your Own Hero!~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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