You Are My Angel

You are my angel,
You are my beautiful princess,
You are my glorious queen,
You are my beloved partner.

 

You are my angel,
You are as beautiful as a sunrise,
You are as magnificant as a summer morn',
Your as bright as the shinning sun.

 

You are my angel,
Your skin is as soft as satin,
Your eyes twinkle like the stars above,
Your smile can light up a room.

 

You are my angel,
Your touch, as soft as a newborn child,
Your body, comparable to a piece of art,
Your persoanlity, as perfect as a cherry blossom.

 

You are my angel,
Your all I could ask for,
Your as flawless as a diamond,
More priceless then the Mona Lisa,
I am lucky to have such a prize,
I hope to never lose you.

 

But have you for the rest of my life.

Reviews

[Day Dreamer]

wow.... dude that's freakin' awesome! love it! keep writin'! :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww... wow. So sweet and so full of love in this poem. I love it! Great poem!

[...MysteryGirl...]

Its sweet and simple, i like it a lot. :) to expand it more i would put more detail to it and expand the meaning, and make it longer. but its very good overall.

[frozensakura]

this poem is really good.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

your adoration shines through beautifully~

[LostinKristina]

Who ever this was written for is lucky.
I really loved the flow of it, and the meaning behind the words.

I teared up a little. but in a good way.

[journey_to]

I really like this ^-^

[Lauren_Elizabeth]

I really love this one.
Any girl would be lucky to have you after reading this.

[freelancejouster]

it's really pretty, and i can tell it's from your heart, but... it's kind of simple. i mean, all sentence structure need not be the same, and such. great flow, however. worthwhile read.

[NeonWolves]

Its realy pretty.
Nice flow.