Birds of a feather

Birds of a feather

A Poem by Samuel Nerdlpants
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Cannibal Ox

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Birds of the same feather, flock together,

conjested on a majestic street corner.

where are the species and who is a clan,

where most of them would rather spread they're wings,

and find new things.

 

How can a doctor say, there's nothing more we can do,

but another will say, there is a cure.

The place for words has left,

let free that metalic, wing pigeon and show the world.

 

Show the world that your wingspan reachees,

it reaches out to the drunk,

the clean, to the funny,

and to the dull.

 

Reach your wingspan to the heavens and reach out,

call it an inspired flight,

inspired by the pigeon that eat pizza crust everynight. 

And show the world.

 

Show the world your metalic, wing pigeon.

 

 

© 2009 Samuel Nerdlpants


Author's Note

Samuel Nerdlpants
Cannibal Ox had some influence on this one.

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Oh gosh! This was beautiful. I really felt the emotion in this.
GREAT imagery and use of words.
But if your looking for feedback, all I'd say is try and make it rhyme a bit better.
This is great though, awesome job. Keep it up!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Samuel Nerdlpants
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