I Wished You Were Mine

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I wished you were mine

Forever more and never gone,

Asked on starshine

Ere the dawn,

And swift the call

I eyed the vault

‘Til cometfall.

Who should appear freefault

But you?

Lovelier than the daybreak,

You better the view.

Wide-eyed and awake

Je rêve ce soir,

Then you whispered its real,

Seul dans le noir.

You’re so surreal

I still can’t believe it,

Descended where the angels dare,

So to me you do at last admit

Shh, it’s love, it’s in the air.

Reviews

[Chloe_Spence]

Such a beautiful piece of poetry :)
I found it almost "Whisked me away" with the lovely imagery :)

[~]

This is really beautiful, "asked on starshine" I loved that line... really enjoyed this poem.

[Isadora Swift]

Another piece of perfection! I think I'm in love with the last line/two lines... weird but true.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Speaking of surreal ...this romantic bleed of the heart, is absolutely breathtaking. Love the french laced in...a simply gorgeous dream of love, whispered with wishes and sighs. Adored this.