I Wished You Were Mine

Comment je t'aime.

I wished you were mine

Forever more and never gone,

Asked on starshine

Ere the dawn,

And swift the call

I eyed the vault

‘Til cometfall.

Who should appear freefault

But you?

Lovelier than the daybreak,

You better the view.

Wide-eyed and awake

Je rêve ce soir,

Then you whispered its real,

Seul dans le noir.

You’re so surreal

I still can’t believe it,

Descended where the angels dare,

So to me you do at last admit

Shh, it’s love, it’s in the air.

Reviews

[ashleymarie]

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

[James Michael Madison P..]

Masterful, Sam. Truly you are a poet, and an old soul.

[Rhys Kihill]

This is hauntingly romantic. I love it. Keep them coming.

[Botania]

Sultry, provocative, dangerous. Well done.

[misha]

What a beautiful write. Great job!

[Lyan]

A beautiful piece, great imagery:)

[Shaquana Adams]

The imagery was really surreal. Nice poem!
-QuanaWana

[Brave girl]

a wonderful peice...I love it;the way that u wrote it is just awesome..and i love the way you got french in the poem in a such amazing and charming way!!! j'aime, merci d'avoir partager!!!

[A. Amos]

This was elegantly crafted and you shared your romantic side as a poet, truly enjoyed!