The Depths of Our Devotions

The depths of our devotions

embodies the breadths of our emotions,

I can neither admonish how I feel

nor describe my confounding zeal,

your mysterious ways enthrals affection,

and overwhelming beauty inspires passion

we do not need adhesive for our attachment,

enchantment, enjoyment, involvement, sentiment

we will forever have our piety

and love always in harmony.

Reviews

[Emma Grace Tennyson]

This is my favorite so far!

[Brittany Zedalis]

I love how this flows together so smoothly, and the word choices. Awesome job!

[Shaquana Adams]

I like how you acknowledged that fact that no one needs adhesive. I guess we just kind of stick sometimes. Thanks for sharing :)