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A Poem by Sam Phillips
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This is based on a short film I made.

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Why won't you go away
New town
Where can I find one
I need this, f**k

What is this
Get out
Calm down breathe 
There's a house, dim light

I can stop here
It's dark
Did I forget it
It's in the back, good

He's sitting still
Its quiet
Cmon now stay steady
It's done, thank god

I'll keep the windows down
Cold air
Look at all that farm land
Whats next, only 100 miles

© 2015 Sam Phillips


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So many different images run through my mind as I read this. I read it like three times, same visuals. I really do like this. Something so simple but evoked so much,visually, in my mind.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Sam Phillips

8 Years Ago

Thank you I try to be as visual as I can in the simplest way even if the person reading it pictures .. read more

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Added on December 4, 2015
Last Updated on December 4, 2015
Tags: murder, death, dark, insane

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Sam Phillips
Sam Phillips

Cincinnati , OH



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