I Think I'll Live Today...

One of my less dark poems. I have my moments (haha!).

I think I'll die today

Hanging in a tree

Hoping that I'll wake up

It all have been a dream

 

I think I'll die today

A bullet in my head

Hoping that I'll wake up

I'm not really dead

 

I think I'll die today

Blood runs from my wrists

Hoping that I'll wake up

Surley I won't be missed

 

I think I'll live today

Fulfilling all that seems

Hoping that it never ends

I'm living in my dream

 

 

 

Reviews

[deeps]

I like this i can feel the emotion bleed though.
Well written. And dark is okay at times that is what makes us human.

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This is good. But, in the last verse "Surley" should be "Surely"
Good job! :)

[CLUTZ]

I like it.....very nice.